Score: 8

"Good."

submission: Flash Chase

date: March 22, 2008

There should be a restart button, the objects tend to get lost. Either that, or make it so that they can't get past the screen.

Score: 6

"Problem"

submission: minigame 1: speedclick

date: March 17, 2008

Once the score is presented; the "replay" button does not work. It just takes you back where the score is. Fix this immediately.

Score: 7

"Good start..."

submission: Stikz memory

date: March 13, 2008

I recommend an assortment of different levels with different pictures/more pictures and such.
Normally expected the levels will get harder as you go on, include a difficult setting (Easy,Normal,Hard,etc.) , maybe even a selection of music.
You aren't expected to fulfill everything, just a few pointers. Good luck
5/5

Score: 6

"Okay."

submission: Nami's Super Sexy Quiz

date: February 4, 2008

Reading the description alone, I sensed this. You do realize this has been done before.?
Anyway, you could have made the questions less harder and provided pictures (Hentai or not) at the end of each correct question. Then you'd leave the person wanting more. With their guard down, you can set your trap.
Another thing, the "clown music" plays to early making it even more detectable.

Score: 6

"Simple."

submission: Hentai-SenSei's Slideshow

date: February 4, 2008

Can't expect much from a slide show, except the qualitly of the pictures. The only thing I think needs fixing is the song. It plays twice if you start the flash from the beginning. Make it so that the song stops, then starts up again when you press "play".
This improvement can help in future flash projects.
5/5

Score: 8

"Sign me up."

submission: [L7C]'s GWC Ad

date: February 3, 2008

Minor adjustments; the voice is the main problem. Try using your real voice, or better yet get someone to do it for you. This might help you in future flashes.
As for the garbage whistle part, sign me up ;D
5/5

Score: 8

"Good."

submission: Marty McMartin Presents

date: February 2, 2008

The animation is good, the subtitles do not fit with the words spoken. I either recommend fixing it, or removing the subtitles all together.
5/5

Score: 7

"Okay."

submission: A big tutorial V9

date: February 2, 2008

Few spelling, punctuation, grammar errors.
Text is a bit small.
Good flash 5/5

Score: 6

"Okay..."

submission: supa pong

date: January 29, 2008

I'm not a fan of Pong games since we have too many on NG as it is; this game would be better if you add some music.
A better back round, different colored ball and this game should be "worthy". You should also make the center piece some sort of spiral...Maybe even a black hole?

Score: 8

"Good."

submission: sonic alpha episode 3

date: January 29, 2008

The text was a bit bulky and blocky, which made it hard to read. You can always change the font color and or text to make the flash more enjoyable.

5/5