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Once the score is presented; the "replay" button does not work. It just takes you back where the score is. Fix this immediately.
Author's Response:
i know, i already said i was gonna fix it.
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I recommend an assortment of different levels with different pictures/more pictures and such.
Normally expected the levels will get harder as you go on, include a difficult setting (Easy,Normal,Hard,etc.) , maybe even a selection of music.
You aren't expected to fulfill everything, just a few pointers. Good luck
5/5
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thank you! ;)
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Reading the description alone, I sensed this. You do realize this has been done before.?
Anyway, you could have made the questions less harder and provided pictures (Hentai or not) at the end of each correct question. Then you'd leave the person wanting more. With their guard down, you can set your trap.
Another thing, the "clown music" plays to early making it even more detectable.
Author's Response:
I know it's been done before. But with the amount of actual hentai galleries passing recently I felt it was needed to be done again. >=)
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Can't expect much from a slide show, except the qualitly of the pictures. The only thing I think needs fixing is the song. It plays twice if you start the flash from the beginning. Make it so that the song stops, then starts up again when you press "play".
This improvement can help in future flash projects.
5/5
Author's Response:
Aaah, fack! I didnt stop the music?! Sorry mate.
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Minor adjustments; the voice is the main problem. Try using your real voice, or better yet get someone to do it for you. This might help you in future flashes.
As for the garbage whistle part, sign me up ;D
5/5
Author's Response:
Ok thnx! PM Sparkwattclock for more info!
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The animation is good, the subtitles do not fit with the words spoken. I either recommend fixing it, or removing the subtitles all together.
5/5
Author's Response:
Thanks for the response, I just noticed this after I uploaded; the subtitles worked fine on my PC. I will consider removing them. =)
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The text was a bit bulky and blocky, which made it hard to read. You can always change the font color and or text to make the flash more enjoyable.
5/5
Author's Response:
hopefully that problem is sorted out after this series and we trying make this flash more enjoyable i hope
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flash tutorials I'm sure their is a flash tutorial on anything you'd want to know.
Nice effort. Why don't you try making something yourself, you do have the potential.
0/5
Author's Response:
I made it in the middle of another animation
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I luf you. Good flash, made me happy in the pants. I liked the animation, original sorta speak.
^_^
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Thax ^_______________^
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Is this related with Naruto??? (GOD I HATE THAT SHIT!)
5/5
Author's Response:
nope. nothing to do with Naruto.
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